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Squeaky swings and tall grass
The longest shadows ever cast
The water's warm and children swim
And we frolicked about in our summer skin

I don't recall a single care
Just greenery and humid air
Then Labor day came and went
And we shed what was left of our summer skin

On the night you left I came over
And we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
Our brand new coats so flushed and pink
And I knew your heart I couldn't win
Cause the season's change was a conduit
And we'd left our love in our summer skin

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:iconevilgeneeus:
Tragic, honest, simple. Love it.
:iconscarsarealwaysthere:
Amazing how simple it is yet so beautiful.

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Photography is a gift. A gift to catch one second, one moment, one memory in time that you will remember forever. And to see that moment in a picture is just amazing…But even photography can’t really capture exactly what your eyes saw and your heart felt.
:iconacryingwolf:
Thank you so much for that very deeeeep comment. (not sarcastic) :)

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98% of teenagers can walk normally without running into walls, if you're one of the 2% that can't, copy and paste this into your signature. :giggle:

you should treat mishaps like sinking ships, shit happens
look whos talking right?
:icondustyflowers:
You have good angling on your photographs, and on the poetry!

btw, what is a coffee shop rhythm?

-DustHoney

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Blow-off the Dust, But shield your Eyes
:iconacryingwolf:
What are you talking about?

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98% of teenagers can walk normally without running into walls, if you're one of the 2% that can't, copy and paste this into your signature. :giggle:

you should treat mishaps like sinking ships, shit happens
look whos talking right?
:iconnoooo:
this is really awesome!

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:iconacryingwolf:
Do you really think so?

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98% of teenagers can walk normally without running into walls, if you're one of the 2% that can't, copy and paste this into your signature. :giggle:

you should treat mishaps like sinking ships, shit happens
look whos talking right?
:iconnoooo:
of course i do! i dont lie

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:drunk:
:iconmisssmachel:
aw, squeaky swings. :) this is really nice.

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i want her to read me over and over again.

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